crepusculo: (Ichigo ☆ EXTRA LARGE!!!!!)
the OVERFLOW。 ([personal profile] crepusculo) wrote2008-11-06 04:13 am
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Title My Brother's Hot Goth Chick Friend (Part 3)
Pairing Konan/Sasuke, a little NaruSasuSaku
Rating PG-13
Notes/Warnings Violence, bad handwriting, hideous ninja suits, GAI-SENSEI!!!!!!!!!, Itachi in a belly shirt again, a healthy amount of gay, sparkly eyes, more drug references, Kisame in booty shorts. THIS IS THE LAST PART! Thank you to everyone who's stuck with me (even though it's not that long...). I hope you enjoy it :)

Part 1
Part 2























/bows 8)

[identity profile] tomoe-daeva.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
YAY! I waited the end to comment on it, it's been really nice XD <3

I love how slutty you portrayed Konan, it's a characterization that suits her XD And OMG, Pein/Konan prevailed ♥ !

Poor Naruto is destined to be ill-treated 'cause he likes dressing up in orange ;_;

Sai's comment in the previous chapter made me LOL HARD and I really liked how you dealt with Sasuke's INNER TORMENT LOL XD

Itachi is an awesome brother. Of course he is <3

I really loved how you kept everything in-character and canon also if in an AU context∼ That's my favourite kind!

--Well, do another soon :'D° !

*gives virtual cookies*

[identity profile] fairy1234.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't really think she's being slutty. :/

[identity profile] tomoe-daeva.livejournal.com 2008-11-07 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
Not trying to pick a fight but-- Hitting on a kid when you're already engaged to someone? I'd call her slutty.
Doing it for the luls and to make your boyfriend jealous, I'd call her slutty.

I didn't call her a slut, but it's indeed a pointlessly flirty attitude. Don't you agree?

I think it's amusing since the "goth chick" stereotype... And it reminded me of Kishimoto's comment about Konan's outfit under her cloak, describing it "outrageous" XD

[identity profile] fairy1234.livejournal.com 2008-11-07 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
She probably did it just for fun and to get Pein a little riled up. I don't see anything slutty about that, flirty yes, a tease yes, manipulative yes, but defiantly not slutty. If she really was, Pein would've probably dumped her on the spot when she kissed Sasuke instead of make out with her.

[identity profile] hieronymousb.livejournal.com 2008-11-07 03:47 am (UTC)(link)
I am not really sure what [livejournal.com profile] dusk intended with that scene (and, well, it's obviously a humour doujin so I don't want to retardedly think too much into it :FFFF), but I got the impression that Pein was completely not threatened by Sasuke, which makes me think he knew Konan was just messing with Sasuke for the lulz and not because she was hot for him.

[identity profile] tomoe-daeva.livejournal.com 2008-11-07 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
--Well, poor Pein, what he had to do, she's probably the only girl in the group XD XD

Seriously though, I wasn't intending the word literally, I actually meant "flirty".
It was just an exagerrate expression to give that naughty feeling for her behaviour, I wasn't meaning that she was whoring herself out to everyone.

I guessed it was obvious.

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
LMAO. I wouldn't call her slutty, more like manipulative.

Thank you for reading! :D

[identity profile] hieronymousb.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
What exactly was she trying to do? Was she trying to teach him a lesson about trying to be something you're not, or was she just having a laugh at his expense?

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
MOSTLY JUST FOR THE LOLS, but also to kind of make Pein be like. Not exactly macho, but .. YOU KNOW ... there are girls who like to be fought over, and make their boyfriends jealous .... THAT KIND OF THING.

[identity profile] hieronymousb.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
O I SEE. Well, that's rather hot. Go Konan.

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
8) HOT INDEED.