crepusculo: (Ichigo ☆ EXTRA LARGE!!!!!)
the OVERFLOW。 ([personal profile] crepusculo) wrote2008-11-06 04:13 am
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Title My Brother's Hot Goth Chick Friend (Part 3)
Pairing Konan/Sasuke, a little NaruSasuSaku
Rating PG-13
Notes/Warnings Violence, bad handwriting, hideous ninja suits, GAI-SENSEI!!!!!!!!!, Itachi in a belly shirt again, a healthy amount of gay, sparkly eyes, more drug references, Kisame in booty shorts. THIS IS THE LAST PART! Thank you to everyone who's stuck with me (even though it's not that long...). I hope you enjoy it :)

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/bows 8)

[identity profile] demondreams.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 09:46 am (UTC)(link)
STEALTH TIME! ::DIES::
"ACTUALLY HE DOES MIND" AWWWWW <3

I'M A BIT TERRIFIED AT GAI AND ITACHI THOUGH LOL
AND MY BUT PEIN'S A BAD-ASS LOOKING SOB!
THE LAST TWO PAGES, SASUKE BACK WHERE HE BELONGS AND HIS BROTHER WATCHING OVER HIM *SIGH SO VERY NICE ::APPLAUDS:: WELL DONE! I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED THIS COMIC FROM START TO FINISH

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 10:15 am (UTC)(link)
EMBRACE THE GAI/ITACHI.

Thank you very much for reading!

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[identity profile] viraldistortion.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 10:01 am (UTC)(link)
I DIED.
GAI RAEP. PEIN. KISAME IN BOOTY SHORTS!??!?! <3
XDDDDDDDD LOOOOL

I LOVE HOW PEIN'S BADASSERY TOOK UP LIKE A WHOLE PAGE TOO.
SAMUEL L WOULD BE PROUD OF THAT MOFO.

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 10:15 am (UTC)(link)
LMFAO. Thank you! ♥ AND YES HE WOULD BE PROUD.

[identity profile] ew-younerd.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 10:09 am (UTC)(link)
YOU ... YOU DID GAI/ITACHI ....


I CANT ... THINK STRAIGHT .... I FEEL LIKE IVE BEEN HIT BY CUPIDS ARROW

IM IN LOVE WITH YOU KAYLA ...

AWEKLKEL:AWLEAWE JESUSCHRIST

SASUKE HAVING KONANS LIPSTICK AFTER THE SMOOCH AHAHAHHAHAHAHA

AWKELAWEKL:AWKLE:KAWL:EKL:AWEKLAWEAWE I LOVE THIS

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 10:14 am (UTC)(link)
LMFAO AKJHEWLKEJWHLWEKJH ♥
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[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 10:14 am (UTC)(link)
HAHAHA NO HE DID NOT


LMFAO :KEJWHWKEJEW TY .. TY ♥

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[identity profile] umaken.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
That was awesome!!! :D
Thanks for shareing.

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for reading! ♥

[identity profile] tomoe-daeva.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
YAY! I waited the end to comment on it, it's been really nice XD <3

I love how slutty you portrayed Konan, it's a characterization that suits her XD And OMG, Pein/Konan prevailed ♥ !

Poor Naruto is destined to be ill-treated 'cause he likes dressing up in orange ;_;

Sai's comment in the previous chapter made me LOL HARD and I really liked how you dealt with Sasuke's INNER TORMENT LOL XD

Itachi is an awesome brother. Of course he is <3

I really loved how you kept everything in-character and canon also if in an AU context∼ That's my favourite kind!

--Well, do another soon :'D° !

*gives virtual cookies*

[identity profile] fairy1234.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't really think she's being slutty. :/

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[identity profile] rutoko.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 11:14 am (UTC)(link)
"End"? Is it end now? O_x

[identity profile] rutoko.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 11:19 am (UTC)(link)
oh, I'm sorry! Now I know it's final part!

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[identity profile] hieronymousb.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 12:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my God. That's so hilarious. XD

LOL PEIN. I just about died of lol. You are a genius, my friend.
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[identity profile] plonks.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 01:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, awwww, AWWWWW. That ending was ridiculously cute :3

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
/melts your heart into mushy goo

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[identity profile] fairy1234.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
PEIN YOU ASSHOLE. Beat his ass Kisame for beating up your Sasuke bb.

OMG, GAI/ITACHI. &hearts KISAME MUST'VE BEEN SO JEALOUS. LOLOLOLOLOL.

I LOVED THE NARUTO/SASUKE/SAKURA-NESS AT THE END, OT3. &hearts

GREAT COMIC. :)))

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
LMFAO. Yes, this was a sad day for Kisame. Gives him time to regroup and rethink his strategies!?

THANK YOU. ♥

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[identity profile] soysauce.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 02:02 pm (UTC)(link)
haAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I'M

LAUGHING SO HARD

AJADKA AT THE ITACHI AROUND THE CORNER AKLDJKLAJDA DN SASUKE GETTING THE SHIT KICKED OUT OF HIMA DJADJKAAD IM LAUGHING SO HARD KAYLA

[identity profile] tl--dr.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
*ITACHI LOOKING DUMB AND STEALTHY* "<== ACTUALLY DOES CARE"

AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH THAT WAS MY SECOND FAVORITE PART IT REALLY WAS

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[identity profile] alstarryn.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
The GAITACHI was /interesting/.

And poor Naru...Sakura hates him too much for all the orange, but she is kinda right. *sigh*

Kisa in booty shorts was PRICELESS. Much love to you! (I wish there was more!!!)

-Star

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)
LMFAO. Interesting, indeed! Thank you very much for reading! ♥

seriously though. the konansaku moment alksdjflkasdf AHHA IT EVEN HAS A DEDICATION ILU

[identity profile] tl--dr.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
"HOW CAN YOU BE STEALTHY WHEN YOU'RE WEARING BRIGHT ORANGE?"

AHAHAHAHHAHAHA THAT WAS MY FAVORITE PART OF THIS I MUST SAY

I'M SORRY KONANSAKU

I'M SORRY GAITACHI

I'M SORRY THE HILARITY OF NARUTO AND SAKURA SAVING SASUKE FROM THE EVIL CORRUPTIVE STONERS

I'M SORRY KONAN'S OVERALL INCREDIBLE HOTNESS

I'M SORRY THAT ADORABLE ENDING COMPLETE WITH ITACHI LOOKING STUPID AND RELIEVED

BUT IT'S JUST THE WAY IT IS :(

IT DOES. JUST FOR YOU BB

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
AHHAHAHA LMFAO. ITS TRUE ... HOW CAN YOU

I JUST REALIZED

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Re: I JUST REALIZED

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[identity profile] sowell.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
STEALTH TIME!!!

AHAHAHAHAHAHA! This is the most amazing thing I've ever seen, ever. Heeeeeeee hee hee. Oh my god, I'm going to keep this open all day so I can read and re-read. Yay!

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:27 pm (UTC)(link)
jdhfglkjdsf oh my gosh. IT WARMS .. the frigid lump of ice that is my heart .. to read this comment. THANK YOU! ♥

[identity profile] akapiratequeen.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
You are a genius!!! Bows to ur awesome.

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! :D

[identity profile] kidscrappy.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
That was seriously awesome

The last 2 panels where so cute ^^

I really like your drawing style

alos, gai/itachi?? new otp <3

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:27 pm (UTC)(link)
LMFAO. Thank you!

just as planned

[identity profile] anat-astarte.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
LMAO!! OMG this is great! Really fun, funny and sweet too! Thanks so much for sharing! :DD

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for reading!

[identity profile] kitanabychoice.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 06:01 pm (UTC)(link)
JUST SO YOU KNOW, I LOL'D LIKE REALLY HARD. XD XD XD

*saves to favorites*

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
EXCELLENT. :D ♥ Thank you for reading!

[identity profile] steamage.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Made of awesomeness. :D

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Why thank you :)

[identity profile] stalkerbunny.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Love it. Art is pretty nice, and I don't frankly even know all the characters and (very much not up to date on current canon, woe. D':) they're still most amusing.

I would have even bought a happy ending for the pairing of choice because the story was that entertaining (despite having no previous interest :3) if you'd gone that route, but as it is...awww ♥ He has such good friends ;_;

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! ♥ HAHA, I'm glad I could make it amusing/believable :D

[identity profile] bubble.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
WHY IS KONAN SUCH A BITCH >:( ALSO I HOPE ITACHI BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF PEIN

SAKURAAAAAAAAAAAA

SHE LOOKS SO FINE IN HER NINJAWEAR :) ILU KAYLA THANKS FOR PUTTING A SMILE ON MY FACE (LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO)

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
LMFAO BECAUSE SHE'S EVIL ... AND HE TOTALLY DID DUDE.



YOU'RE WELCOME MY DEAR

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[identity profile] eli-artemisia.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww, I love that last panel <333 This was fun stuff, haha. Thanks for sharing! I've memed them all!

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for reading! And I'm glad that I could make something mem-worthy *_*

[identity profile] shadhahvar.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 08:43 pm (UTC)(link)
...........that's so amazingly cute afkasfjalsfjasfkjdsfklj

THANK YOU. FOR SHOWING. THE DORK SASUKE IS. ♥ and why his friends are the best thing ever.

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
jdlskjdsldkf

YOU ARE VERY WELCOME. AND YES .. TEAM 7 FOREVA

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[identity profile] ex-betterino391.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 09:20 pm (UTC)(link)
So awesome. ♥

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
THANKS ♥

[identity profile] vladimirachan.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
The PeinKonan made me happy.

Sunglasses!Pein is hot.

And...Naruto and Sakura's dorky rescue...was dorky. XD

Oh, yeah, and Gai/Itachi will kill me with its awesome.

[identity profile] dusk.livejournal.com 2008-11-06 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I had to hide his eyes somehow ... LOL.

BUT THEY ARE DORKS SO ITS ALL GOOD. And Gai/Itachi will never stop being amazing

♥ Thank you for reading!

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